Equal Temperament
Composite scores how is this calculated?
Text: 9.17 · Audio: 8.10 · Rules: 13/15
Text axes
form_as_finite_generator
9
long_fuse_plotting
10
status_as_live_wire
9
genre_register_collision
8
tonal_duality
10
structural_reveal
10
politeness_as_masking
9
voice_violations
10
Audio axes
character_distinctness
9
delivery_match
8
pacing
7
prosody_variation
8
consistency_across_episode
8
Audio
WPM: 25 · WER: 0.00 ·
seams: 4 ·
distinctness: marginal
(Δ 9 Hz)
Script statistics
86 lines · 739 words · 8.59 avg words/line
| character | lines | words | line % | word % | avg w/l |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Tobias | 48 | 437 | 55.8% | 59.1% | 9.1 |
| Arthur | 38 | 302 | 44.2% | 40.9% | 7.95 |
| third | lines | words | wpm | beats | scenes |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| beginning | 35 | 328 | 96 | 3 | 1 |
| middle | 21 | 190 | 93 | 1 | 1 |
| end | 30 | 221 | 85 | 5 | 3 |
Iteration trajectory (this run, 2 iters)
Each meta iteration generates a fresh concept; iter scores aren't directly comparable as "improvement." The shaded row is the iter currently displayed.
| iter | concept | autorater | audio judge | rules | seams | applied |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 01 | Equal Temperament | 9.18 | 6.55 | 14/15 | 3 | 0/0 |
| 02 | Equal Temperament | 9.17 | 8.10 | 13/15 | 4 | 0/0 |
Critique summary
Composite 9.17/10.
TO FIX (most severe first):
• [tonal_shift_present] Land one moment in the final third where laughter falls quiet. Cite a specific timestamp in `analysis.standout_moments`. The 'vinegar in the sponge cake' beat.
• [no_explain_the_joke_meta] Let the joke land — no character names the device. No 'as if to say', 'lampshading', or 'breaking the fourth wall' in beat descriptions or why_it_works.
KEEP (load-bearing strengths):
• [long_fuse_plotting] Axis `long_fuse_plotting` scored 10/10. This episode executes definitional, axis-defining long-fuse plotting. Every minor physical anomaly established in the first five minutes acts as a load-bearing emotional plant that is meticulously paid off in the final minutes. The plant-to-payoff ratio is 1:1, making the second listen deeply rewarding.
• [tonal_duality] Axis `tonal_duality` scored 10/10. A masterful delivery of the 'vinegar in the sponge cake'. The episode achieves a profound transition from farcical bickering to silent, shared grief without any unearned melodrama. The moment the urn is placed, the comedy vanishes, exposing the actual stakes of the play.
• [structural_reveal] Axis `structural_reveal` scored 10/10. The reveal completely reframes who the characters are and retroactively shifts the subtext of the entire preceding argument. The listener realizes the fight over piano mechanics was actually a bitter territorial war between a guilty grandson and an adoring live-in carer.
STRETCH:
• [genre_register_collision] Name the collision in `premise.hook`. High register × small situation. Make it the SPINE.
AVOID (audio anti-patterns):
• Audio judge flagged: Minor breath artifact audible before Arthur speaks at 0:42.
• Audio judge flagged: Slight volume jump on Tobias's line at 15:20, sounding like a punch-in.
• Audio judge flagged: Chunk join seam noticeable at 14:20.